Two Steps Behind
love is a feeling deep inside
a feel of myself and my pride
an undefined circle
& I keep moving along its side
Love is a selfless joy ride
but a little selfish somewhere inside
I say its fun its happiness
but it is the biggest pain I try to hide
I say I understand you
know you.....
but tell me why ?
when I stand in your shoes
I find myself equally confused
Love is patient and calm
but I was the most impatient
in the last seconds
before each time we met
Love is pure and clean
But sometimes so blind
can't see anything else
having your image
in my heart and my mind
Love is the purest gift I ever had
you didn't change me
brought outside the person inside
made me think what am I
I am with you when you are with me
and when away....................
I am just two steps behind
but I was the most impatient
in the last seconds
before each time we met
Love is pure and clean
But sometimes so blind
can't see anything else
having your image
in my heart and my mind
Love is the purest gift I ever had
you didn't change me
brought outside the person inside
made me think what am I
I am with you when you are with me
and when away....................
I am just two steps behind
7 Comments:
it always feel the same boss...
gud work...keep it up....
somebody said "everybody has to define their own religion" same is true for love..."u have to find ur own definition..."
its a nice experience though....unlesss u be in it..u wont know how it feels...!
and i believe u need to be in it once atleast..full fledged to grow up as a man...
so vixy dude...way to go..!
keep discovering.
Ive never read such a chaste form of expression. ..words generally oppress the real meaning behind an emotion...but i must say..uve really been able to choose ur words well :)
baap re.... yeh kya ho gaya tumhe.... amazing poem.... very simple.. and very very beautifull.... who is the one.... we all want a reply.. you just couldnt have written this poem without having someone in mind..... and the ending was just brilliant.... u sending it to alankar ki nahin....
[:O] you've turned into a stalker or what ?? [:P]
just joking.
fundoo composition.
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bahut achi poem hai vixy bhaiya.
itna hi kane ko hai ki pyar mein expectations bahut jayada ho jati hein aur shayad ye isliye bhi ki when u are away from someone then only you realise fear of loosing which brings the desperation to hold on to relations/person that you may actually never had with you.
aise hi likhte rahiye. lagta hai ki ek bhavi kavi ki jhalak dekh paa raha hoon.
right at the top of any blog I ever read....great pics in between, u rock.
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