Saturday, March 25, 2006

Two Steps Behind


love is a feeling deep inside
a feel of myself and my pride
an undefined circle
& I keep moving along its side

Love is a selfless joy ride
but a little selfish somewhere inside
I say its fun its happiness
but it is the biggest pain I try to hide

I say I understand you
know you.....
but tell me why ?
when I stand in your shoes
I find myself equally confused

Love is patient and calm
but I was the most impatient
in the last seconds
before each time we met

Love is pure and clean
But sometimes so blind
can't see anything else
having your image
in my heart and my mind

Love is the purest gift I ever had
you didn't change me
brought outside the person inside
made me think what am I
I am with you when you are with me
and when away....................
I am just two steps behind

13 Comments:

Blogger abhinav said...

it always feel the same boss...

gud work...keep it up....
somebody said "everybody has to define their own religion" same is true for love..."u have to find ur own definition..."

its a nice experience though....unlesss u be in it..u wont know how it feels...!

and i believe u need to be in it once atleast..full fledged to grow up as a man...
so vixy dude...way to go..!
keep discovering.

11:16 AM  
Blogger vikas said...

such a realistic and critical view of love can only come from a person who has experienced it many times (vixy dude - what r u upto these days :D]!

...these lines are well written and come straightaway from the heart..love is the purest of all emotions and is the motivating force behind many great things..the taj-mahal for example and also vixy's poems.

keep it up!

11:47 AM  
Blogger Cupid said...

Gud!! cud hv been better if it had more fresh thoughts. Its gud again par thora criticism jaroori hai.

12:33 PM  
Blogger saurabh said...

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12:39 PM  
Blogger saurabh said...

masterpiece !!!
Poem padhke pyaar ho gaya :)

12:40 PM  
Blogger sagaRedefined said...

Ive never read such a chaste form of expression. ..words generally oppress the real meaning behind an emotion...but i must say..uve really been able to choose ur words well :)

1:08 PM  
Blogger aneesh said...

baap re.... yeh kya ho gaya tumhe.... amazing poem.... very simple.. and very very beautifull.... who is the one.... we all want a reply.. you just couldnt have written this poem without having someone in mind..... and the ending was just brilliant.... u sending it to alankar ki nahin....

12:18 PM  
Blogger whoami said...

[:O] you've turned into a stalker or what ?? [:P]

just joking.

fundoo composition.

7:50 PM  
Blogger Adi said...

Simply incredible...
i suppose...love is really a magic..as is reflected from your composition...since it has converted you into a poet.


I am not in a position to comment on this masterpiece since i have not yet tasted the essence of the poem, which is evident from the fact that i cannot write such exemplary poems.

keep it up vix...u r simply great

8:04 PM  
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11:36 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

bahut achi poem hai vixy bhaiya.

itna hi kane ko hai ki pyar mein expectations bahut jayada ho jati hein aur shayad ye isliye bhi ki when u are away from someone then only you realise fear of loosing which brings the desperation to hold on to relations/person that you may actually never had with you.

aise hi likhte rahiye. lagta hai ki ek bhavi kavi ki jhalak dekh paa raha hoon.

11:38 PM  
Blogger Neha said...

u have done a great job. ur poem was fantastic..i mean so true & pure feeling were there in it...
I really love ur poem a lot..
And the way u presented it was excellent with the use of simple words...But with a big meaning....which creates a impression on heart...

u r great poet yaar...i have become a fan of u..But one thing i must say that person is very lucky for whoom u have written it...

keep it up...if u write any another master piece like this then let me lnow..

1:16 PM  
Blogger MODIfied said...

right at the top of any blog I ever read....great pics in between, u rock.

4:49 PM  

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